[Second Sig] Critsim welcomed

[YouAreNotBob]

Ok, so after making my 1st sig I decided to make a new one. I hope this one shows 'improvement' because if not I will kill ..my pillow. Feel free to critize,give me tuts/suggestions,etc.

1st SIG:

2nd SIG:

2nd SIG v2

Yes I realize the backgrounds are *somewhat* the same, its because I'm using the same tutorial but doing some different things.

Rate it from 1-10

Thanks :)


EDIT: Yes, the stars are pretty lame/suckish/looks suckish. I tried to find something better, but sadly I couldn't so I used that :S

[MentaL]

[☠RockAngeL☠]

first one is nice , 2nd not that much .

good work , keep it up :)

[Laced]

They pretty much are the same thing, just dif renders and backgrounds.

Try something different next time, find a tut to use or what not and see what you can get out of it.

3/10

[Mike]

I much prefer the first... Except for the over-stretched render.

Keep working, you'll improve.

[Mary]

Here's a tip, when you're resizing the render, hold shift so the render would be even and wouldn't look bad :P

[YouAreNotBob]

first one is nice , 2nd not that much .

good work , keep it up :)

Dammit, I just liked the text for this one :p, and thanks.

They pretty much are the same thing, just dif renders and backgrounds.

Try something different next time, find a tut to use or what not and see what you can get out of it.

3/10

Alright, thanks for the oppinion

I much prefer the first... Except for the over-stretched render.

Keep working, you'll improve.

Alright, thanks for the opinion man.

Here's a tip, when you're resizing the render, hold shift so the render would be even and wouldn't look bad :P

argh! Dammit, thats what I forgot to do, thanks though, will do on my next sig.

[YouAreNotBob]

Here's my version 2 for it hope it looks better :) :


and sorry for double post >_<, just wanted people to see my newest one.

[iRock]

Nice, good job, just work on blending the render a little more, and try to use moar effects.
Other than that realleh good man :)
6/10.

[Ridiculous]

The combination looks alright, but needs more work compared to your previous one.

[Onnagata]

2nd sig v2 looks better...but your render looks stretched again

[buzzfizz]

Render looks stretched, its basically the sdame technique as the 1st sig. Try experimenting on different tools, dont just stay with one technique.

[ChewBecca]

his head is weirdly shaped or you have stretched him slightly

[~DN]

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/10 xD

[YouAreNotBob]

his head is weirdly shaped or you have stretched him slightly

its the motion blur =/

[Shagakrath]

I like the 2 one :) but need to learn more

[gtxx911]

Hm Nice, 1rst one is alittle good :D
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[ChewBecca]

its the motion blur =/

welly sorry looks crap lol
i like your 1st one much better