Shana

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  1. #1
    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Shana


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    CnC is all welcome. I actually liked this one, i don't know about you guys.
    How could I do better on this?



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    pɐǝpdoɹp KikiKANNIBAL is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Negativeeee space.
    and it lacks blending
    keep working on it

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Quote Originally Posted by KikiKANNIBAL View Post
    Negativeeee space.
    and it lacks blending
    keep working on it
    :P
    awwww, i thought the negative space was pretty cool.
    oh well, but i do know that it blends to me.
    am i wrong?
    gradients, smudging, blurring, i tried all that too. =X

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    win CioNide is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Too red. Use nice colors like blue, or white.

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Quote Originally Posted by CioNide View Post
    Too red. Use nice colors like blue, or white.
    hmmmm, i don't think so,
    white maybe, but blue? no..
    it would look ugly, imo.

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    0xC0FFEE spikensbror is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Agreed, needs more blending.
    Try some fg smudge on the right.
    The negative space bugs me as well. :O

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    Fuck You Retro! is offline
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    Re: Shana

    I like one better,
    because it looks like on 2 and 3
    there is alot of extra space,
    :P

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    Grand Master cowjuice is offline
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    Re: Shana

    teh empty space ): not good
    but its alrite :P

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    Grand Master alexdesire is offline
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    Re: Shana

    The brown looks awful :/

    Also the tag looks un-finished + more depth and more effects.

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    thanks guys, i will make a v4 of this, i guess i'll just use v1 and add to it.

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    Ragezone OG FrostElite is offline
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    Re: Shana

    It looks incomplete, like it's missing something

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    Burn the land, HydroBenZ is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Quote Originally Posted by FrostElite View Post
    It looks incomplete, like it's missing something
    It's the negative space on the left.

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Quote Originally Posted by FrostElite View Post
    It looks incomplete, like it's missing something
    Quote Originally Posted by HydroBenZ View Post
    It's the negative space on the left.
    well, besides the fact that that has been said 30 times, what else should i do?

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    Burn the land, HydroBenZ is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Try messing around with smudging a bit. o.o

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    well, yeah, but i need ideas, how to improve version 1.
    take out that bright c4d?
    use dodge tool a bit?

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    0xC0FFEE spikensbror is offline
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    Re: Shana

    Quote Originally Posted by purpleNblack2 View Post
    well, yeah, but i need ideas, how to improve version 1.
    take out that bright c4d?
    use dodge tool a bit?
    Move on to a new tag?

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    ehhhh, alright xP
    i'll make a new tag..
    do you have a really good tut? i pretty much can't think of anything..

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    Sorcerer Supreme HoneyDew is offline
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    Re: Shana

    For Me, I'd Choose The First One.
    If You Want Neg Space, You Should Put More Blending etc.

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    Grand Master purpleNblack2 is offline
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    Re: Shana

    yeah, true,, i'll try to work on a new style and try to find a good tut



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