Shield Until Death

[SeraphiPod]

Krg,

Used a stock,
render, and FX :P c4ds.


CCs Please!

[MentaL]

[blyddlyl]

Sounds corny for a name..Nice effects but llooks like it has too much..

[SeraphiPod]

I really can't take a name,
but the action's says its all.

[Zen]

dont cover your focal point with c4d.
the text blends a little too much.

~Zen

[+DI-Dachi]

Agreed on that the fx should not cover the render to much, and edit your colours, they look bad now, if you would change them a bit it might look way better, a bit monotome for me, and also to blue/purple.... make the colours more fitting to the render I think... and text a bit closer to the focal, and edit the clippings, or smudge them a little I think might work wonders... I use smudge on clippings on text sometimes and you get sort of like a gradient feel to the text then... ;) hope this helps you a bit... gj still though, kiu

[HydroBenZ]

Way too overcrowded around the render.