Now dat looks awesome, really good work, you are improving ^^
The contrast on the lightning is way too high, try lowering the opacity of the layer your used to either apply the shadow or the light
Apart from that it really is nice ^^
Lose the borders and work on your background quality and colors, you need some more effects going on, cause the tag looks really boring and nothing special.
Lose the text for now and work on it later, once you get better with creating tags, then try implementing text into it. Work on the quality of the whole piece, and on your focal, make it stand out more.
Read allot of tutorials and you'll get there, bud.
I am not a anime girl lover but you've made it really great so now I fall in love with them because of this :D
Keep it up mate, GJ.