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[Hauyser]

C.c please... I'm a bit rusty, but I think this piece doesn't look to bad.

[MentaL]

[StaticNova]

nice sig o-o
like it

[Hauyser]

Tis' messy but heh. Thanks. ;)

[ChewBecca]

its nice.... but like Hauyser said its a bit messy.

[Laced]

This needs alot of work.

the focal is too light.

There is to much lighting on the right, it almost looks blurry.

You could add a border, fix the text.

Alot of things, it's not so great

2/10

[Hauyser]

Oh well, thanks for the comments. ;)

[gtxx911]

it looks ok, i say 5/10

[Joser]

It's prtty good, but it's very comfusing..
Too many things going on, and a little too bright.

6/10

[ushpen]

Looks nice, but its kinda messy.

[Hauyser]

Well, I didn't like number one so I fixed up. :D

[Clysse]

its 8/10 for me ^_^

[KikiKANNIBAL]

v2 looks better :]
Less messy >.<
Good job

[Chloe Sakuna]

v2
It is less busy then the first. Clear color on the render too. Nice job.

[ushpen]

V2 is nice. I like it. Maybe you can add some borders?

[alexdesire]

I like what you got going there. very unique in it own sense.

Clean the focal and bit and it'd look the sex.