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  1. #1
    Elite Member FineFair is offline
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    This is sparta

    V1
    Spoiler:


    V2
    Spoiler:



    V3
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    rate & comment.
    Last edited by FineFair; 30-03-12 at 01:01 PM.


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    Grand Master George SS is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    I don't see anything wrong with it , except the thick stroke around it.

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    Re: This is sparta

    Quote Originally Posted by mucski View Post
    I don't see anything wrong with it , except the thick stroke around it.
    the stroke around what?

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    Grand Master George SS is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    Signatures.

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    Grand Master Thunda is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    @muscki its called frame. Anyway I like the v2 more since the spartan is a bit highlighted compared to the v1. Keep working and improving!

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    Re: This is sparta

    Quote Originally Posted by extrata View Post
    @muscki its called frame. Anyway I like the v2 more since the spartan is a bit highlighted compared to the v1. Keep working and improving!
    yeah, thanks.

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    Grand Master George SS is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    No in fact its called stroke <.< , this is not a picture , it's a tag xD

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    Grand Master Thunda is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    Well i dont remember ppl using stroke for a frame .. or is it been to long since I've been using photoshop.

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    Re: This is sparta

    Too simple imo, no depth, render is a bit too dark, needs lighting, text is bad...i still like it though but try improving those.

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    Re: This is sparta

    I like v2.

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    Elite Member FineFair is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    Was bored, so I made some edits..
    rate please ex: 8/10

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    Numero uno tagger. Tiretism is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    Read allot of tutorials, allot allot, they'll help you.

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    Re: This is sparta

    Choose what I like of the 3? I'll go for v3 because it matches the background instead of other ones.

    Rate?
    v1 = 5/10
    v2 = 7/10
    v3 = 9/10

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    Grand Master Flash1369 is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    Text is aweful, that giant one+the regular one. also the render is bad, remove all those strokes from him

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    Elite Member FineFair is offline
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    Re: This is sparta

    Quote Originally Posted by Tiretism View Post
    Read allot of tutorials, allot allot, they'll help you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Flash1369 View Post
    Text is aweful, that giant one+the regular one. also the render is bad, remove all those strokes from him
    we'll, I like it. :)

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    Re: This is sparta

    V3 seems nice, a bit sharpened?

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    Re: This is sparta

    Even though it's well done I don't like it, too much of that type of smudge, maybe if it was different it would be better.
    It's well made except for the text, but I don't like it

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    Re: This is sparta

    Quote Originally Posted by zigui98 View Post
    Even though it's well done I don't like it, too much of that type of smudge, maybe if it was different it would be better.
    It's well made except for the text, but I don't like it
    that's because I didn't find any good font the fits.



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