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[Avenged]

C&C P1x m45t0rZ

[MentaL]

[Flawz]

too over constrasted, text looks weird

[Iain]

too red and text is weird
6/10

[Ramuthra]

get rid of that yellow border, text needs fixing not sure what the problem with it is.

[Avenged]

thats how i wanted the text and also the border was first thing i forgot to put a black outline

[Mr-K]

Make it smoother... too brilliant... over contrasted... main idea is good, but I don

[Darth]

text looks to wierd. other then that it looks ok.. of course if you get that black border in there :P

8/10

[richard167]

I believe that it has much red :p

[Jhewt]

Is too red for my taste, and the font looks weird :p

[The_Gatekeeper_]

I think a more elegant font would work with this, and as everyone else said, there's too much saturation in the red (as well as contrast).

[*ReneGade*]

rid of the noise on border of text looks like color spectrum, and put milder tone of red on there you would be alright

[Bionic.]

Ouch ! my eyes .. :P too bright and text doesnt look good .. like how her eyes are showing .