Twisted

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    Elite Member IRockTheGimp is offline
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    Twisted





    And don't give me shit like 'it's horrible.' Actually critique my work; and tell me what to improve on. It takes me a lot of time and effort to make these, so I would appreciate if you would just take a little time out your hands to put some sense into your post.


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    Hello silence1 is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    i like it, maybe add some colour? black and white is a bit dull, and the right side looks empty.

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    bensonhu Skycut is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    I like it, don't really see much wrong imo.

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    Grand Master Loxx is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    Black and white rocks in my opinion, and yes I liked the signature very much. Theres nothing to wrong as Skycut said. Well, except the right side. Should add something to the right side.

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    Member paptron 4040 is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    Good work =D
    Negative space and b/w works well in this piece.

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    Member xsaber007 is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    nice work.. :)

    i like B+W color... but to much black space.. :D

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    Elite Member IRockTheGimp is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    thanks for comments.


    btw, right side was meant to be dark.

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    Grand Master .YourName is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    i can deal with if its meant to be dark, but its completely empty, which isnt good

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    Revived Vision is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    As im looking on the sig it seems like there's like life behind that image. Lol just my imagination. I really like it.

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    Grand Master iNs@nE is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    Not a bad try. Try and go for the abstract look and work on the right hand side and you're good to go. :)

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    Elite Member IRockTheGimp is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    Quote Originally Posted by .YourName View Post
    i can deal with if its meant to be dark, but its completely empty, which isnt good

    Yes. I can imagine that someone like you would add something to the right. This would kill the whole piece by distracting attention from focal. :trumpet:

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    Grand Master FrostDeamon is offline
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    Re: Twisted

    Needs text, and a border.
    The negative space doesn't amuse me much.

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