War Ridden Sig

[superstar911]

Hello RZ here is another sig i made with out a tut couldn't decide which one is better so im letting you guys pick

First one:


Second One:


Please Rate, Comment, and leave thoughts for improvement

[MentaL]

[Sunny]

first is not bright so its good in my view but the other one has a good background so umm there both good in different ways.

[superstar911]

Then I'll just takethe render from the first one and put on the second one lol
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[Rigged]

2nd has too much contract. don't edit it more, it's done. work on a new piece.

[HyDroKD]

You got a really nice grunge background, use a better render and place it somewhere that's more visually appealing, work on text.

5/10

[superstar911]

hahaha wasnt going to edit anymore i was jk around and alright thanks i say this everytime i never care about text text isnt my thing

[HyDroKD]

you should care about text because ounce you get good at making siggys then your gonna want a text that works well with your sig and if your text is shit then the whole sig can be trowed off.

[Retro!]

I like the first one better,
but the 2nd, I like the effects on the guy,
shoulda put it together like that
;)

[superstar911]

i mean i dont care about the text atm i mean i will once i start to make good ones other then that its just a thing to prove that i made it never really understand how to get good text to put in sigs and thanks retro lol

[Skycut]

You definitely need better placement of the render and you need to work on blending. If the text is messing up your work, than either work on it or don't add it. Try to make the text less visible, usually everyone wants their name to be all over their signatures but I usually find the work itself more important.

[superstar911]

Ok thank and I wasn't going for blending on this one I tried motion blur for the first time
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[a1boogie]

6/10 the renders are ok just need a better one fancy up the text more hmm and place the picture beter place

[superstar911]

ok thank you guys i wanted to the left cause of the way of the gun shoots is all