I like the start. I might use this as an intro, then drop it with something else. What ever EQ/Envelope you're doing to the High Hat is pretty horrible lol. (to me anyways) You have some panning issues as well. You're using a lot of the same frequencies that are fighting to be heard.
I liked your, "New Dubstep Experiment," until you started playing with the LFOs.
Keep it up though, you're on the right track for sure.
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