My song.

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  1. #1
    Gamma Gabrieth is offline
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    My song.

    Well I got bored one day so I recorded this on my comp. The sound is not great and its not perfectly sinc but I did my best with what I had ^^ (The drums is midi hehe)

    Here is a link to download the song:
    http://jp1987fr.free.fr/Power%20shock%20DM.mp3

    Tell me what do you guys think about it.

    P.s its metal so if you don't like metal don't listen :P


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    Gamma alexdesire is offline
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    Re: My song.

    I dont like The singing :(

    But the gutair is well good Could be faster at some points like at the begining where u change Notes? if thats right :/[I dont know music jargon etc ^^]
    Drums have a nice beat ^^

    /Fate

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    Banned KyleEnos is offline
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    Re: My song.

    I think what he means is you could replace the intro with hammerons, instead of the alternate picking?

    It's pretty decent, the vocals were a bit shakie, but for something you did out of the blue it's pretty good :)

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    Me > You DaCheat is offline
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    Re: My song.

    You know what's cool.... Firefox 3.0 let me play this automatically haha hell yeah.

    You need a drum add on bad... :P

    Ok my thoughts on this... I know you said you just threw it together, and honestly that's what it sounds like. Between the guitar, drums, and vocals, it sounds like 3 people tried to come up with something and just threw it into one song.

    That being said, with some tweaking this song could sound pretty bad ass. So keep working on it. Get some effects on those vocals too. ;)

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    Alpha Member Gonia is offline
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    Re: My song.

    Pretty cool song there! I bet you like Dark Tranquility? =p

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    Gamma Gabrieth is offline
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    Re: My song.

    Hehe thanks for the comments.
    Yeah well I did do it in half an hour an plugged directly to my sound card ^^
    Ill do a real recording after I start my band again on Paris.
    If not I don't listen to Dark Trankility ill go check it out.

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    Omega ChewBecca is offline
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    Re: My song.

    i think the guitar is going to face for the beat?
    i dunno it just doesnt sound right to me lol xP

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    Re: My song.

    metal? yuck, i hate metal.....
    altho its nice that another rahezoner creates music

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    Human Version 2.35 Unleashed Hell is offline
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    Re: My song.

    You could use some extra "gain" in your vocals. Sometime the the music doesn't really sit well on the drums' beat. But yeah, you got lotsa potential ;)

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    Re: My song.

    If there was a Satan, his voice would be just like in this song.

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    Banned KyleEnos is offline
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    Re: My song.

    Quote Originally Posted by theninjaway View Post
    metal? yuck, i hate metal.....
    altho its nice that another rahezoner creates music
    And metal hates you :)
    Last edited by KyleEnos; 19-06-08 at 07:40 PM.

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    Account Upgraded | Title Enabled! Spark is offline
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    Re: My song.

    It scared me slightly, I love it :D

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    Re: My song.

    Quote Originally Posted by Intelext View Post
    If there was a Satan, his voice would be just like in this song.
    Hehe I guess thats a compliment.

    Well for the drums what I basically did was I tabed in on guitar pro and exported it in midi. But since I am not a drummer I basically put the same beat every time hehe and was lazy.

    Well when I get a descent recording with my real band ill let you guys here it. But we are planing on adding Keyboard and a womans voice as well. But that will be in a while since most members are leaving and I am reforming the band on Paris in September.



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