lovely dash. thank you
been ages since I been here. I was hoping something exciting might have happened, but oh well.
Anyways OT: It seems like you're trying too hard to make it heavenly. You overdid the effects, and it just looks like a white thing imo. "heavenly" is just supposed to feel extremely light (not light as in holy, light as in weightless), natural, and have a little sprinkle of purity.