[Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

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    [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    Yoz!!
    -This is my first map.
    -This map can be for all the modes
    It's abit ugly but don't call me a noob. I had practiced making maps so that they will look better.
    I had made a mini battlefield or base at the second picture. you can defend urself at the taller thingie.


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    Thx
    Edit : I have changed the map. Now it does not have the "outside"
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    Last edited by razi46; 03-05-10 at 01:05 PM.


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    Umm.. If you want to see the outside, its here!




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    Last edited by razi46; 06-05-10 at 11:53 AM.

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    hmm not bad, could do a little editing where one object ends and one starts (overlapping)

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    First of all , not bad for the first map.
    Here are some tips:
    - A reall sky, rip from Town
    - Light map, this will make it look nice.
    - Remove the outside it's ugly. Just make it inside bigger.

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    Quote Originally Posted by 00niels00 View Post
    First of all , not bad for the first map.
    Here are some tips:
    - A reall sky, rip from Town
    - Light map, this will make it look nice.
    - Remove the outside it's ugly. Just make it inside bigger.
    Oh.. Thanks 4 d tips.

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    Alpha Member gregon13 is offline
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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    not bad may want to add light maps and change the size of the textures by holding shift or maybe it was ctrl and use the arrow keys

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    Quote Originally Posted by 00niels00 View Post
    First of all , not bad for the first map.
    Here are some tips:
    - A reall sky, rip from Town
    - Light map, this will make it look nice.
    - Remove the outside it's ugly. Just make it inside bigger.
    I agree.

    You should also add more obstacles or something, the general layout looks alright, but it just looks so... plain?

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    Ouh i see.. I will improve more of this map.

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    9/10 ! very good :)

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    Not bad , but i think it needs more graphics but gj anyways

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    Awsome Excellent 10/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by EvilControl View Post
    Awsome Excellent 10/10
    tyvm! I did not expect any1 to give me that high for my first map. looks sukish. i thought you all would rate it around 9 or 8. To me it's not that nice.
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    Quote Originally Posted by razi46 View Post
    tyvm! I did not expect any1 to give me that high for my first map. looks sukish. i thought you all would rate it around 9 or 8. To me it's not that nice.
    Haha, 9 or 8 is still very good.

    I rate it a 6/10.

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    Re: [Map]My First Map! ^^ BARN

    You should change some Textures.
    Work on the Texture alignement.
    Lightmap, a decent lightmap always makes a Map way better than without light because of the shadows/brigthnes etc.

    Map Structure: 5/10, Outside & Sky is realy crappy.
    Textures: 5/10
    Lightmap: 0/10
    Overal 10/30 | 1/3



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