My 1st Loading Screen

[Khristian20]

http://www.host4images.com/images/116loading_adult_tn.jpg

This is just my 1st time so no bad comments :)

[MentaL]

[balloehalloe]

for your first time, he is pretty 6 / 10

[Elian]

Surprises me that everytime someone releases his first loading screen there is redish shit at the background.

+ the loading bar is stolen from abstrakt

There is a black box on the left-down-and-righdown-corner??/
I think you couldve done more with the renders -.- they are just pasted on there.


3/10 even for a first time i'm disappointed.

[gago117]

Wow, what the hell. Exposed a server name.

Goddamnit.

[Joe9099]

The only thing i like is the fonts lol

[I<3Bass]

Surprises me that everytime someone releases his first loading screen there is redish shit at the background.

+ the loading bar is stolen from abstrakt

There is a black box on the left-down-corner??/
I think you couldve done more with the renders -.- they are just pasted on there.


3/10 even for a first time i'm disappointed.

You said everything I had in mind.

[VisualSeven]

looks like a fucking runescape lava dungeon

2/10

[AliasCoder]

1/10

- Googled background
- Exposed GunZ Name (colors don't go with ANYTHING)
- Renders incorrectly placed/resized/and rendered
- Black box at the bottom right
- abstrakt's loading bar

0/10 for originality
1/10 for concept
1/10 for first time

- Danny

[Irahnik]

even if it's your first it fucking sucks. ^^^^^^^everything Danny said.

[Torsen]

go rot in hell. what the fuck happened to you? you used to be an actual respectful person, fun to be around, never ego'd always was on the light side of things, now you're an egotistical prick who thinks he's better than everyone. Ironic, Irvin, whatever you call yourself now, i hope you rot in hell.

No no no. Irvin, is sexy. In fact, he will refuse to rot in hell. Satan himself bows down to Irvin's sexiness.

@paperplanes 0/10 for attempted and failed attack on someone as awesome as Irvin.

@op 0/10. No seriously. If it's your first loading screen, what makes you think putting it on RZ will do? Do you really expect someone to use it?

[AliasCoder]

Khristian, I predict you used GIMP so my recommendation to you is that next time you could download GIMP (or photoshop) brushes and go ahead and brush the background layer, and there ya go, 8/10 for originality. And if you put some effort in it, create your own loading bar outline its really not that hard!

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[GzFKoron]

Surprises me that everytime someone releases his first loading screen there is redish shit at the background.

+ the loading bar is stolen from abstrakt

There is a black box on the left-down-corner??/
I think you couldve done more with the renders -.- they are just pasted on there.


3/10 even for a first time i'm disappointed.

The blue/black box above the loading bar has been taken from abstrakt too lol.

[Cock]

Nope horrible, 0/10 good luck on your others.

[Aimed]

A first timer doesn't realy know what he can achieve with photoshop.
Therefor I won't rate, but I will tell you to google/browser for other wallpapers/loadingscreens and look for what interests people these days.

Then search for tutorials who help you achieve the skill to imitate other loading screens/wallpapers.

Good luck :)

[Khristian20]

This is my 1st time to use a image editor lol so its ok for the bad comments ^^ its a part of growing up :)