My first GoGunZ Loading Screen

Ok so since everyone is just being complete assholes and saying they don't like it, i'll try to help you.

My advice:

Outer Glow - Don't use it. It's not very appealing to the eye, and makes things blend less in your work.

The Render (The GunZ Character Image) - Blend him more, erase/fade parts. He kinda sticks out way too much. Looks out of place.

The Background - Try to be a bit more creative with it, or make it a bit smoother. Use some smudging, maybe some c4ds.

The Text - Don't make it stick out so much. Unless you want that to be your focal point. Text should blend a bit more, not pop out as much.

Loading Bar - Make it smaller, and again, don't have it stick out so much. It's just a minor detail of the project, it's not meant to be a focal point.





Overall it's a good attempt, I think it needs a little more time and thought, but good for a first try. 7/10.

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Originally Posted by mikethemak

Ok so since everyone is just being complete assholes and saying they don't like it, i'll try to help you.

My advice:

Outer Glow - Don't use it. It's not very appealing to the eye, and makes things blend less in your work.

The Render (The GunZ Character Image) - Blend him more, erase/fade parts. He kinda sticks out way too much. Looks out of place.

The Background - Try to be a bit more creative with it, or make it a bit smoother. Use some smudging, maybe some c4ds.

The Text - Don't make it stick out so much. Unless you want that to be your focal point. Text should blend a bit more, not pop out as much.

Loading Bar - Make it smaller, and again, don't have it stick out so much. It's just a minor detail of the project, it's not meant to be a focal point.





Overall it's a good attempt, I think it needs a little more time and thought, but good for a first try. 7/10.

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for you possibly the text isn't something you want people to focus on but maybe he does, what one prefers another might not but overall decent advice

the loading screen is pretty good for a first time but the more you work at it will get better, also theres no point in releasing loading screens specifically ment for a specific server

I just figured that with the render larger and in the center it would be the focal point. Text art normally doesnt have a render, and has text more centered so its a focal point. But i guess who could focus there o.o.

I Like it .. 8/10
And fuk you Bartjuh,
If you can do better than show some of your work dumb'ass.