My first map ^^

[Zewa]

ok I started making maps also now
here is my first map ^^


GTK Preview:
http://i42.tinypic.com/n70h0n.jpg

Gunz Preview:
http://i43.tinypic.com/2meuz5c.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/x3hji8.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/6dtnol.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/2vt16wy.jpg


Download:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=Q21CV6A7

[MentaL]

[Military]

about 6/10, you did good for your first

[Phoenix]

It's kinda like a combination of Mansion, Factory and High Haven. It looks nice, especially for it being your first map. 8/10.

[evilcorpse]

yeah,, from what iv seen...

i can tell that you got the talent.. as its good even being at your first output..

so keep up and might sumday youll become like warren and i..

[Zewa]

thx

im working on new map I hope this will come better xD

[Refused]

Nice job Zewa! It looks pretty decent for your first.
I hope the 2nd will look great aswell.

[FlipBug101]

de ja vu, i've dreamt about this in one of my dreams before the exact same pic in my dream.wow

[pluke001]

Good job.

a tip: those ammo, hp, ap spawns doesnt work in gunz as you want so adding them into your map is pointless >.<

[KillerStefan]

@ People above me: Why give only positive feedback, you're not really helping him...

Try using own textures.
Look at DusteR, Virus, Sivie and Koreans make their maps and try to learn from it.

Look here:

http://gzmap.sourceforge.net/forums/viewforum.php?f=6 < Finished Maps
http://gzmap.sourceforge.net/forums/viewforum.php?f=5 < WIP Maps

[Zewa]

yea I know not so good xD

but I first learn make better maps then I try my own textures

well atm Im working on my second map
http://forum.ragezone.com/f496/worki...nd-map-653181/

[HellSniper]

Use the Surface Inspector and aligne the textures better.
Its not nice like this.
Also be sure to use other textures than the gunz once, like mentioned abouve.
Search on google, no i DONT mean the google picture search, search for textures.
There are many free good/high quality texture sites out there.
Map Structure -> ~6/10
Textures -> ~4/10
End Score 10/20

[Nobody666]

textures don't go together.
Some seems blurry, but gunz does that so w/e.
Id say get rid of the books on the edge of the case.
and probably add more to it, not so much empty space.


But it definitely is good for a first map.

[Dak]

Nice, for the first map..

[gsterv900]

i like it nice and open

[StephanW]

Use own textures instead of the ones from MAIET (you could use some but not a whole map with it).
Size your wall etc. good, try lightmapping after a while :D.