Flyff web 1.0

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    audisbroder is offline
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    Flyff web 1.0

    Hi y'all,

    This is my second time I'm trying to design a flyff website.
    I need your opinion.

    Screens:

    1) Screen 1
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    2) Screen 2
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    3) Screen 3
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    - audis
    Last edited by audisbroder; 01-04-13 at 07:41 PM.


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    Now you can tag me! Detox is offline
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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    It looks like he's puking up the blue line: Screenshot by Lightshot

    Also the slideshow doesn't fit, as it doesn't have round borders. All the other objects have round borders, why don't the slideshow. Another thing is that you have to learn to use guides when designing. Your objects aren't organized enough. Screenshot by Lightshot

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K0ZvQdtkhis <--- Guide lines

    Lastly, the gap between the slideshow and the news section is way to big. To much empty space in general.

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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    Quote Originally Posted by ๖̶̶̶ۣۜYyZz View Post
    It looks like he's puking up the blue line: Screenshot by Lightshot

    Also the slideshow doesn't fit, as it doesn't have round borders. All the other objects have round borders, why don't the slideshow. Another thing is that you have to learn to use guides when designing. Your objects aren't organized enough. Screenshot by Lightshot

    Adobe Photoshop CS4 Tutorial On Using Guide Lines Part 1 - YouTube <--- Guide lines

    Lastly, the gap between the slideshow and the news section is way to big. To much empty space in general.
    Thanks for your opinion/help! I'll now fix this stuffs

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    Enthusiast aleksjug is offline
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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    It looks preety basic, I think you can do much better :)

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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    Quote Originally Posted by aleksjug View Post
    It looks preety basic, I think you can do much better :)
    That's my style. To keep it basic, easier to find out stuffs on it example as "CP, server status, etc".

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    Proficient Member TheAnkou is offline
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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    Nice for newbie :D

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    Trust your senses Gravious is offline
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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    There's a certain difference between "basic" and "your style".

    Basic would at least have a proper layout, and correct alignment.
    I know this is your first website, and I do think your designing skills will improve. But there's no need to show everything you produce while experimenting in this section.

    Also, is this a development project or just to show your website?
    Last edited by Gravious; 10-04-13 at 04:27 PM.

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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    Seems really generic.
    Your color scheme bores me, but you show potential. Why not mix up the styles and such?

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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    Quote Originally Posted by Moshi View Post
    Seems really generic.
    Your color scheme bores me, but you show potential. Why not mix up the styles and such?
    I don't have the psd file anymore, but I'm working on another website now.

    I don't like the mix up the styles and such.

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    Game Developer MisterKid is offline
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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    ladabroder it sucks.

    It looks like it is stretched not really nice looking

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    Re: Flyff web 1.0

    Quote Originally Posted by MisterKid View Post
    ladabroder it sucks.

    It looks like it is stretched not really nice looking
    As I wrote on my previous post, I don't have the psd file anymore.

    I'm asking you to stop with ladabroder, KrypToN started with that shit. Or nvm, your name explains pretty well.
    Last edited by audisbroder; 05-05-13 at 04:59 PM.



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