I tried make a wallpaper

I tried make a wallpaper, what about? how improve this?

coments please, rate it please

Thanks to all ^_^

[Size 800 X 600]

http://img426.imageshack.us/img426/5...lpaper14ue.jpg

Apologies for how harsh this will sound;

- The typography is poor and ill suited
- It's far too busy for a wallpaper
- Way too many colours
- Poor quality render and badly cut out
- Posted in wrong section

No offence to anyone, but can't people tell when something looks bad?

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Originally Posted by Smo

No offence to anyone, but can't people tell when something looks bad?

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People can say this........and you can move this for right section????

Hmm... to busy and too many colours. Try again?

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Originally Posted by Smo

Apologies for how harsh this will sound;

- The typography is poor and ill suited
- It's far too busy for a wallpaper
- Way too many colours
- Poor quality render and badly cut out
- Posted in wrong section

No offence to anyone, but can't people tell when something looks bad?

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100% agree with u.

moved

Lines & stuff like lines are nice, But the colors are so bad & renders are too blury :P

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Originally Posted by Smo

Apologies for how harsh this will sound;

- The typography is poor and ill suited
- It's far too busy for a wallpaper
- Way too many colours
- Poor quality render and badly cut out
- Posted in wrong section

No offence to anyone, but can't people tell when something looks bad?

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its good that atleast some people express their real opinions, and I 100& agree with you