I need some advice for whoever will listen
i had the most amazing girlfreind in the world, and i really loved her dearly, but i lost her and everything else important in my life!! i wrote this poem and i dont know whether to show her or not, what do you think?
The moment i meet you i was swept off my feet,
Your kindnes, Your beauty, Your truly unique!
The moment i had you i thought i had died,
Floating to heaven to live on cloud nine,
and then without warning things started to go wrong!
In a breif amount of time my loved one was gone!
Maybe I tryed to hard or not hard enough,
if only i knew that love was so tough!
To much to soon or to little to late,
if only i could show you how we could of been great!"
You never know what you have til its gone,
its times like thisits better to be strong!
But the longer your gone the harder it gets,
I would pay any price to make me forget!
I miss you now more than ever before,
but im lost without you,
i cant take any more!
as time goes by i try hard to forget,
living in shame and endless regret
As sure as the sun rises and fades to the depths,
as long as i breathe i will love you to death!!
plz dont take the piss im not very good at poems but im running out of ideas, i need her back
