hi, i'm curently serving my country as a soldier,(you see every 18year old and above, once he finishes school is obligated to serve in the army for 2 years),
and whenever i find the chance i write poets(as a hobby you might say :P).
I want to know what other people think of them and so thats why i made this post( i did not include all my poets cause a large number of them is written in greek and so i chose of what i though it was good , from those written in english.)
So here they are:
1.)
From the first time i saw you,
i was stunned,
Your eyes,your lips, your hair,
beautiful like the godess of love!
I couldn't take my eyes of you,
you beautiful flower, my sun!
Your hair are the sunshine,
which lights my heart,
your eyes are like a waterfall,
full of hope,love,
like them there are none!
I wish i could tell you,
how beautiful you are,
but i'm a coward you see,
like a kid which always runs away from girls
I've found this way then,
to express my feelings towards you,
Hope you accept them,
my beautiful flower, my love!
But even if you don't,
please don't hate me,
for i'm deeply in love with you!
Instead let us be friends ,
and i promise,
i will not bother you again.
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2)
I'm here alone,
quarding some guns,
I wonder what you're doing,
now that i'm gone
I miss your smile,
I miss your hair,
I miss the whole you,
Those lips,those eyes
your beauty cannot be described
in these simple words in lines!
I wish i was there,
holding your hand,
and say "I LOVE YOU"
with all my heart!
Your life gives meaning ,
to my empty world,
please come and save me,
from this cold cage called "I'm alone"!
You are the light,
which quides my way,
Please shine like the sun
and bring the day to my dark heart!
But back to reality here i am,
standing all alone,
and quarding theese guns!
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3)
You are like a flower,
in this empty world,
you are the joy
i was looking for!
And when i see you,
my heart goes crazy,
my mind gets blinded,
stunned from your beauty
I want to touch you,
and hold you tight,
and say " I LOVE YOU"
with all my might!
You are a godess in my eyes,
come one and let me,
be by your side!
You are the sunshine,
which lights this world,
come on and save me ,
from my cold world!
