My first sprite sign

I followed the Flaw's tutorial.

http://i28.tinypic.com/6y1g6g.png

Rate 0/10 plz

id say 8!

Pretty nice, I like how all the colours match.

Sharpen it a little more and keep the text in the background instead of the foreground.

id say 8/10 the sprite seems to be really dark :s

/Fate

Thaks to all.

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Sharpen it a little more and keep the text in the background instead of the foreground.

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Thank for the advices


EDIT= I made also this:
http://i30.tinypic.com/vy8nsl.png

Kinda looks like the outcome flawz got for his sprite tut.....except with re-arranged layers and another gradiant map...

Pretty good...But you forgot to add the the displacement xD...Still very nice :)

Great for it's your first one