V.1
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2...lvecopyvg0.jpg
V.2
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6...lvecopyhe8.jpg
Printable View
The render is barely visable.
Also, most of your signatures use the exact same thing, the distort, I think you should try something new.
Looks pretty nice though
The Render is hard to find but that could be a good back ground use tbh.
Lessen the distort and add some other things. Try a darker background.
It dissolved a bit too much if you ask me. ;) ....