first banner

First banner, nothing special just some smudging, gradient maps etc

v1.
http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w...n/banner-1.png
v2.
http://i522.photobucket.com/albums/w...-Shin/ffff.png

It really hurts my eyes.
9.5/10
O-o

I cant make out anything as the colors are to bright.
Text is hard to read.

its nice , but the WebSite Text not that good "fix it"

change it and it will be good , and dark the photo little its to shiny its hurt my eyes too >.< .
8/10

I'll touch it up later thanks for the tips
it almost 3am i going to bed ^^

8/10 i dont like the text and its a bit bright

The first one is the better of the two, but the text is hard to see..

Regards,
Vynsan

4/10
The size is awkward...the render quality of the first one on the right is pretty bad.
The colors are all mixed up and hardly go together.
The text needs work.
Good try for a first I guess.