[Second Sig] Critsim welcomed

Ok, so after making my 1st sig I decided to make a new one. I hope this one shows 'improvement' because if not I will kill ..my pillow. Feel free to critize,give me tuts/suggestions,etc.

1st SIG:http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c1...niturecopy.jpg

2nd SIG: http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c1...iture3copy.jpg

2nd SIG v2 http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c1...gniture3v2.jpg

Yes I realize the backgrounds are *somewhat* the same, its because I'm using the same tutorial but doing some different things.

Rate it from 1-10

Thanks :)


EDIT: Yes, the stars are pretty lame/suckish/looks suckish. I tried to find something better, but sadly I couldn't so I used that :S

first one is nice , 2nd not that much .

good work , keep it up :)

They pretty much are the same thing, just dif renders and backgrounds.

Try something different next time, find a tut to use or what not and see what you can get out of it.

3/10

I much prefer the first... Except for the over-stretched render.

Keep working, you'll improve.

Here's a tip, when you're resizing the render, hold shift so the render would be even and wouldn't look bad :P

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Originally Posted by RockAngel

first one is nice , 2nd not that much .

good work , keep it up :)

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Dammit, I just liked the text for this one :p, and thanks.

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Originally Posted by Laced

They pretty much are the same thing, just dif renders and backgrounds.

Try something different next time, find a tut to use or what not and see what you can get out of it.

3/10

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Alright, thanks for the oppinion

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Originally Posted by Mike

I much prefer the first... Except for the over-stretched render.

Keep working, you'll improve.

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Alright, thanks for the opinion man.

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Originally Posted by marytran

Here's a tip, when you're resizing the render, hold shift so the render would be even and wouldn't look bad :P

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argh! Dammit, thats what I forgot to do, thanks though, will do on my next sig.

Here's my version 2 for it hope it looks better :) :
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c1...gniture3v2.jpg

and sorry for double post >_<, just wanted people to see my newest one.

Nice, good job, just work on blending the render a little more, and try to use moar effects.
Other than that realleh good man :)
6/10.

The combination looks alright, but needs more work compared to your previous one.

2nd sig v2 looks better...but your render looks stretched again

Render looks stretched, its basically the sdame technique as the 1st sig. Try experimenting on different tools, dont just stay with one technique.

his head is weirdly shaped or you have stretched him slightly

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/10 xD

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Originally Posted by ***LILK@OS***

his head is weirdly shaped or you have stretched him slightly

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its the motion blur =/

I like the 2 one :) but need to learn more