My first rendering

This is my first one, I did it with pen tool, while watching Achmed the Dead Terrorist, I was inspired to render him lol.
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Now, it's football time, go Fins, beat Pats! Go Colts, Beat the Jaxsonville Fags!

lol....

Wrong section?

Omg

Ummm.

I really don't know what to say

Just no.
Sorry my friend , but thats worst then terrible.
-3/10

THATS SOOOO FUCKIN BAD .
mann take your time i use ms paint for rendering, you use magnify and take your time erasing.

Lay off, this was my first one ever, and I used no tutorial.

And i thought my first one sucked...

thats
like
really fking ugly >.>
but better then i can probably do :)

Mate...honestly, it sucks. In my opinion rendering requires alot of concentration and you were watching a video whilst doing it? A recipe for critism imo. =[ 2/10

Lol, that was terrible buddy, my first render was better than that using the PL Tool. Now I improved it by using pen tool. All i can say is, that's sucks, even the render does.

Lol, honestly that sucks really badly. -1/10

You need to work alot on that o_o

Sucks ass. Seriously.

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Originally Posted by Flawz

lol....

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Flawz has spoken!

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Originally Posted by joserskid

Just no.
Sorry my friend , but thats worst then terrible.
-3/10

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You'r right this is soooooo bad -5/10