Lightning

I know I haven't done anything in a while so I whipped this up.
http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p...yabusacopy.jpg

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

dude.

:(

the wireframe doesnt look good at all, the render isnt blended, the colors are blinding. it just doesnt look good. but keep workin at it youll get better promise

Wow, that is one of the ugliest things i've ever seen :S

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so I whipped this up.

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You sure whipped this up.. with an electric egg beater.

render needs to be blended mate.

Uh... there is no depth? Not good.

Needs more blending, and lighting. A good composition, but it just needs more to tie it all together.

Hmm, not that good, there is no focal point, no depth and the render doesn't blend. I guess you might get rid on those lines too. It makes it ugly.

shoulda been ice!

This was meant to be a book cover so meh.

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Originally Posted by theninjaway

This was meant to be a book cover so meh.

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Wrong Dimensions for a Book Cover?