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for my art project, i have chosen to redesign a DVD cover, and have chosen to do Kill Bill. and put both CD's into one box.
anyway, here is a picture of one of my designs i have done.
http://forum.ragezone.com/blogs/lilk...-contined.html
tell me what you think.
You should fix the text, give it some more color and life.
the text is the actual font for the kill bill cover, and posters, andwell anything t do with kill bill lol :P
The font is fine, just change the color, add some effects and such.Quote:
Originally Posted by ***LILK@OS***
ah i see what you mean
when i catch up with the writing side of this project, ill do a bit of faffing with the text... just for you!
Looks awesome. Nice job ^^
Only thing is the big white blob in the middle.
Should have a bit less opacity.
its ment to be like, light from a window
ill short that all out when i get my own photos of the bride, as in, my own model instead of a render :P
Great job. 7/10
Looks pretty good, not bad :)
Just the text/font is kinda killing it D;
Just a lil more contrast and it just as good as perfect :)
I left you the message in the blog...but I'll say it again, it looks good...except there is NO blood
No bloody dress, no blood marks over the cover...I mean for a movie that literally used up tons of blood...you know.
Also I hope you didn't hand it in yet...small mistake there I think, check your blog. Can't be bothered to type it out here, you know...since I already typed it and all...even though this sentance is most likely longer than what I would have said... Yeah...
okay. i havent handed it in yet no,Quote:
Originally Posted by wounded
but ill add blood and what not when i do my photo shoot in the studio with my model :)
Just be careful if you add blood, it can look like shit, or it can look really cool.
And you know the small spelling mistake.
aye yeah, i think the cover that i was copying the text from was from a different country :PQuote:
Originally Posted by wounded
and ill practice blood, we got a tablet at college, will make it easier