Logo >_<

V1
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...tled-5copy.jpg
V2
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f2...-5-DifFont.jpg
i dont know what should i do to make it simpler. any help?
also what do u think of it? /10

You should use AA for first :P

I think changing the font of that "S" to something modern, such as "Sci-fi" fonts. That would be great!
The logo is quite creative, so, nice work ;)

thx :D
EDIT: done it now :D

Very choppy. Try rounding out the edges.

that will go when i put it on an actual piece of work :D
its in big to give it more quality :P
it will only be in like 21x30.

Looks nice. Little choppy.

Id give it a 6/10
But in a piece work maybe it'll look better ^^