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Hey. I was bored and decided to create a layout. It's nothing special and yes it is rather like the Habbo layout.
Rate it and give me some advice on how I could improve it.
http://imagehoster.webs.com/website.png
Edit: I got to say, It isn't finished yet :P:
Bit plain. =/
5/10
It's very dull, and plain.
That made me want to close my Firefox. >.<
RoflQuote:
Originally Posted by kuribohgx
Lol, it could of been more work put into it, also it's HTML no excuse, it could be better.
4/10.
Being considerate.
What, is, that!?
If you want my HONEST opinion, that is HORRIBLE. :/ Seriously mate. Go and practice a bit more.
Thanks for feedback. I know it's not the brightest layout in the world, but I'm going to finish it and then Up-date it. And while I'm doing that, I'll be looking at Tutorials how to create good WebLayouts.
Thanks for feed back :):
It's un-ratable.
It's nowhere near finished.
We can't look at your code.
What I will say is, the colour scheme is atrocious...
Try to start Easy.. Just make some buttons in photoshop and a field for putting your text there, and then slice it and save it :O
I'd try learning how to use HTML/CSS properly before starting PHP server-side scripting.Quote:
Originally Posted by YelmANutter
Your right to be honest. I keep jumping from Language to lamguage to fast. I'll study HTML & CSS for a few months. then move onto PHPQuote:
Originally Posted by Cask
Its way to plain... add more stuff to it
I agree with the others, it is plain and simple. However, if you want to improve it, add more content boxes and don't use multiple colors, try one color for the top part and a gradient for the content boxes, or the other way round. 4/10 at the moment, until you finish it.
Wow, oh my, that light-blue at the top is horrible.
yeah me too,,Quote:
Originally Posted by kuribohgx
On Topic,,
as mentioned before, try to learn ATLEAST the basics of BOTH HTML and CSS,,
0.1/10... CSS and HTML are very very easy languages, there are millions of tutorials and im not being sarcastic or making an exageration... Also, there are software that actually help you code and build a layout visualy...
i dont care how you did that, where, or when... but that fucking sucks!
I would honestly say this isn't rateable. This isn't even quality. You just slapped some random colors together, making it look as though your knowledge of CSS/HTML is mildly limited.
I would stick with a color scheme that look RIGHT when together. Also if you're making the banners width 100%, depending on the layout, as you're a starter I would do the same with the navigation -- I could see you doing the navigation in the middle if of course the colors looked right.. but in this case I can't say that.
I would also make the content area as long as the navigation that could help you make it look of more quality.
I would say before learning PHP you need to know HTML. And to make your HTML have style, it's a must to learn CSS. All of those style languages make a circle if you think of it being long-term.
Anywho, I hope you read up on HTML/CSS and show us some of your updated work when you're finished!:D:
Thanks for your Feed back Aaron. I'm gonna make a Image Navigation bar. The reason I have made the width quite small between the navigation bar and the top banner is I can't think what to put onit. All I can think is news, and thats about it :O:. I'll look around some websites and see if i can get ideas.
I've up-dated the layout abit more, buy...
- Changing layout to matching colors
- Changed 2 Content boxes around slightly
- Added background
- Added Image Navigation bar
I think it looks better. I hope you guy's think so to :):
http://imagehoster.webs.com/website2.png
It really does look better than the first one, but I dont like the background :)
The first one was so horrible, that even a colorblind could find better colors for it :p
now THAT'S one hella of a difference.
I advice you to make the thingie that says "DIV etc >_<" a lil bit smaller and the news panel to the middle.
now, i can rate that... 5/10 for the effort.
[QUOTE=Kadi
3/10 its a bit so messy
Nice, this one is much better than the previous one. I would make two side columns and make a middle content area for the content or the news itself. In the sides you can have like side-navigations, affilates, advertisements and all of that stuff.
Much improvement without a doubt.
EDIT:: a couple posts up already said what to do in their message ahah. Oh well.
Do you know what Aaron. I never thought of side bars for Adverts and stuff.
Thanks for that. I'll do some work onit tomorrow, It's fairly late here. :P:
Edit: I've just figured out how to use Style Sheets. Put CSS in a seprate file instead of having it in the Main pages source. :P:
No problem, you have to fill it up with something, eh? :laugh:Quote:
Originally Posted by YeImANutter
Yeah, when I started off I put the CSS in the main coding document until figuring out I can do put it in another document.css lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by YeImANutter
Try adding alittle more colour, etc.
also, if you need some help with CSS i'm happy to help.
:): Thanks. If I need some help, I'll PM you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Cancel Man
WTf is this for layout
0/10
You made it on paint?
No I never made it on paint. I used Adobe Dreamweaver CS4. :):Quote:
Originally Posted by VeSa
Maybe it's time to start using it's features ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by YeImANutter
wtf is that man it was made in panit 0/10
I have been using it's features. Draw AP Div Tag. Can't draw one in Notepad.Quote:
Originally Posted by Daevius
And I'm only a beginner anywho.
Prove to me that's made in paint. :):Quote:
Originally Posted by myhotel6
Your work is looking a lot better compared to the first Example.
God knows how you came up with something like that.
I'd like to see more of it as you progress :D: