Erm...Sig

Well... This is my first time ever using an irl person for a render... not that I even made much sigs ( I made around 5sigs so far.......)


v1:
http://i379.photobucket.com/albums/o...rtist/Lala.png
v2:
http://i379.photobucket.com/albums/o...ist/Gokuv4.png
v3:
http://i379.photobucket.com/albums/o...sharpen1ed.png


Well Seeing as I'm still a beginner, NOOBS! WHat do I need to improve on..
Oh yea, and which is the best :O

Edit: Deleted Versions :O:


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FInal One :
http://i379.photobucket.com/albums/o.../RobotDone.png

Noot badd . ;)
Use some c4d's & more tuts & it will be sex.

V2 is the best out of them all.

You went overboard on the smudging/lighting after that.

Border is uneven though, i would highly suggest duplicating the border layer next time and just moving it over.

Text could be better, but overall it's pretty decent.

i think v3 is the best on both pictures

yea I got bored... so I decided to mess it up a bit :D
I thought v2//v3 was best .

ehh I'll fit the border, i forgot to fix it :P

Oh yea and like... what do I actually need to 'improve on' :P

The first thing I immediately noticed when looking at version 1 was that Goku's face and dragonball were shadowed while his hands were way too illuminated compared to the brightness of the dragonball. I'm glad you changed that in version 2.

Thanks Bob, I made V3 - Sharpened it once and added 'flashlight' lighting. Is v3 better now? :P

Hmm, All of them look very nice, but v2 is the best. (:
Did you follow a TuT? If so, mind PMing me the one?

PM-ed..

And, does anyone have actualy... 'crtisism'
or something bad to help me improve :O

v2 is win. Good job :)

Thanks, but once again does anyone seriously have something bad to point out :O

I'm glad people 'like' it :D

I might fix the text and add some more C4Ds.,

thats a nice signature,
needs a name:p
other than that its great,
9.5/10

Lol, What do you mean by 'needs a name;p' You mean I should name the sig? :P
And thanks a bunch, 9.5 rating <3 :D

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Originally Posted by Flareon

Lol, What do you mean by 'needs a name;p' You mean I should name the sig? :P
And thanks a bunch, 9.5 rating <3 :D

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Yea,
I mean.
whats a signature with its name?
just sig?
thats to plain.

Hmm.. I'll think Of a name :P
I'm not good with names :O