My first GoGunZ Loading Screen. Well, its my first so dont complain if its bad xD. I didnt know the use so i just used a random size. so here is it.
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/568...dingscreen.jpg
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My first GoGunZ Loading Screen. Well, its my first so dont complain if its bad xD. I didnt know the use so i just used a random size. so here is it.
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/568...dingscreen.jpg
Hella ugly, sorry! xD
Take your time to watch some tutorials, Then try again!
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I am totally agreed with bart
lol. first time man.
nice 6/10 the whole loading bar and some parts of light ruin it
I like looking of it, but I dont like how you made that man going to gray o_o
in my opinion it looks really nice except for the loading bar - 7.5/10
It's very bad 3/10 sorry.
FreeSpeed
Not my type sorry, 1/10
Sory i dont love its 2/10 The Style Is Ugly
....way to go.. you don't have to say ugly.. seriously, you release something and ill call it shit, it's a first time, no need to be harsh to the kid.Quote:
Originally Posted by Bartjehh
Sorry 2/10 for effort, not my type :/
NICE TRY Anyways
IF i release something now, It will be advanced GFX/Design k?Quote:
Originally Posted by Kingston
Follow the color wheel, and don't use yellow with brown or black and white.
Ok so since everyone is just being complete assholes and saying they don't like it, i'll try to help you.
My advice:
Outer Glow - Don't use it. It's not very appealing to the eye, and makes things blend less in your work.
The Render (The GunZ Character Image) - Blend him more, erase/fade parts. He kinda sticks out way too much. Looks out of place.
The Background - Try to be a bit more creative with it, or make it a bit smoother. Use some smudging, maybe some c4ds.
The Text - Don't make it stick out so much. Unless you want that to be your focal point. Text should blend a bit more, not pop out as much.
Loading Bar - Make it smaller, and again, don't have it stick out so much. It's just a minor detail of the project, it's not meant to be a focal point.
Overall it's a good attempt, I think it needs a little more time and thought, but good for a first try. 7/10.
for you possibly the text isn't something you want people to focus on but maybe he does, what one prefers another might not but overall decent adviceQuote:
Originally Posted by mikethemak
the loading screen is pretty good for a first time but the more you work at it will get better, also theres no point in releasing loading screens specifically ment for a specific server
I just figured that with the render larger and in the center it would be the focal point. Text art normally doesnt have a render, and has text more centered so its a focal point. But i guess who could focus there o.o.
I Like it .. 8/10
And fuk you Bartjuh,
If you can do better than show some of your work dumb'ass.