Zelda Sword

Hello everyone,

I made this sword from an example here :

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4...wordjjwork.jpg

Here is it in-game from diffrent angles:::::::
Click here for the slideshow

Please comment me and be kind :D
thejj,

EDIT: Fixed now, it now is perfect in the hand and larger::::

Fixxed:::::::::picture::::::::::::::::::http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/6179/gunz006so.jpg
http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/1241/gunz006y.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1427/gunz009j.jpg

That looks great yo. Show ingame pics.

Thanks man

here is the pictures in game:

ImageShack(TM) slideshow

I don't know how to make a screenshot from the side, i would probably record it go in replay mode then hit "m" and take a screenshot then?

No problem dude.

Fixxed now, new fix uploaded

nice :) 8/10

Ah thanks mate!

Added new pictures in game

It looks too dark but good job!

3-4/ 10

No I am not being mean, I am critiquing you so you may GROW. I
am not some push over person who is going to tell you, OMG GREAT
JOB, YOUR DOING PERFECT, because you are not. You will never learn
unless you know what you did wrong. You are far from perfect, but
so am I.

1.Make your own textures.

Like srsly, creating the model is only <40% of the work

Solution: Learn to shoop

2.You completely raped the amount of faces/ vertices.
Swords should NEVER be over 500 vertz in my opinion,
unless its ungodly in detail, and you almost doubled that

Solution: You do not use the 32 vertice primative cylinder,
change it to like <10 for this type of model, that is why good
texturing is so important.

3. Your sword is out of detail

Solution: Even if you did create that texture, you place your
inside of the blade vertices along where there color changes,
so that it is SHARP where it needs to be Sharp.

Not bad, 8/10

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Ricky Blaze

Not bad, 8/10

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Srsly dude you just went down the freaking Release
list, put a 5 second post, and went on.

That is what we call spam

1. You dont even really look at it at all
2. You just give a simple rating
3. You dont try to help at all

If you dont watch out you will be infracted

Thanks Wucas :)

could you maybe help me a little with blender if you got the time, seeing on what you post you know alot more of blender then i do.

i'd really apreciate it if you would help, as you said im here to learn not just to release.

thejj

Quote:

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Originally Posted by thajj

Thanks Wucas :)

could you maybe help me a little with blender if you got the time, seeing on what you post you know alot more of blender then i do.

i'd really apreciate it if you would help, as you said im here to learn not just to release.

thejj

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I fried my last computer (hehe overclocked and got lazy
and stopped watching heat) and I have just bought a car,
but buy the 27th (Payday!) i should have enough cash to
buy a new computer.

Not saying I wont try to help before then, just makes it
difficult

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Wucas

I fried my last computer (hehe overclocked and got lazy
and stopped watching heat) and I have just bought a car,
but buy the 27th (Payday!) i should have enough cash to
buy a new computer.

Not saying I wont try to help before then, just makes it
difficult

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How are you posting now? and will you read your pm i added my msn, and i added you on my msn, so hope to speak you in a few min.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Wucas

Srsly dude you just went down the freaking Release
list, put a 5 second post, and went on.

That is what we call spam

1. You dont even really look at it at all
2. You just give a simple rating
3. You dont try to help at all

If you dont watch out you will be infracted

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I like you, and yes I hate when people say 8/10 even when I release my work..this is the main reason why I don't release none of my work because people here don't know how to rate how nothing oh and I didn't even download your model but I can tell by the 3rd ss that the model isn't even decent.