Logos

Well here are some logos ive been sketching out im not very good at drawing but yeah i want to know if this one for my group (fates rejects) is good i can take the eye out if that will make it look better.

Then i tried doing one for my gamertag suicidalfate0 and wanted to know if teh blend of the s and the f looked good.

Taking all comments and suggestions.

http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/a...1/PIC_0008.jpg

http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/a...1/PIC_0010.jpg

Didnt know which quality looked better.

http://i860.photobucket.com/albums/a...1/PIC_0011.jpg

bump? i need somone to comment and critizie it etc lol so i can start editing and coloring in photoshop this thread has 26 views but no comments lol

I dont get this, it looks really weird.

yeah it was just free sketching of logos trying to come up with ideas i have great ideas put cant put on paper :P

Meh, they just give a messy impression, doesn't really get the message out that they're supposed to mean anything.

Alright how can I improve that it's for a xbox clan and some video series I do
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tbh theyre really terrible. like, that is what I would consider a logo when I was 11.

^ agreed im a terrible drawer i just did to my limits my mind has so many better ideas though.

bump?

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Originally Posted by superstar911

bump?

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I don't know why your bumping, you asked if they were good, and you got your answer from like 3 different people.
Your drawing is too messy, stick with an idea, and swirly fonts look ugly.

well not if they are good i need ways to improve or other ideas cause i cant draw for crap like i said i need ways to improve look profesional etc.

They're too human-like, and not in a good way. They're very messy and undefined. Like honestly, I don't even know what letters those are. Also, no offence but judging by how it was drawn -- were you having a seizure or something? Why is it so weak and squiggly? You really need to strengthen your lines and define the shapes. Try adding in some color as well.