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Constructive criticism please ...
I have coded the website ... the demo is available here : Perfect World Genesis 1.4.5
Quick screenshot :
http://picturestack.com/510/909/BuMPerfectWorcZU.png
It has been also updated based on the comments below.
Just like before ... I need constructive criticism.
The Server Status window , I am aware it's plain , but I have no idea what to put there. :|
Also note that I did not test it in all browser , and its noway a final release.
wow wtf thats progasm....you2pro4me
I see that all of it are alright except the 'Play Now' thingy, it's too plain for me. I suggest to change it and make it a bit similar to the gold one in the middle top of the website, that probably will make the whole website better.
Eh, not particularly a fan of dark designs, but this has potential.
The play now button is too generic, it doesn't make me want to play the game. Now I know that isn't the purpose of the button, but your website is telling me "popout", for some reason, so I would go with a round, more out-going design for the play now button. Sort of thinking in more of a web-developing aspect now, but I'm sure you get the idea.
The user-login is a little big, imo. I think if you make the input boxes a little smaller and go with a different background color and value color, it's be nice (value color = "USERNAME/PASSWORD" that is inside the actual box). With making it smaller you could add options such as "Secure Login", "Remember me", "Forgot my password", etc. Making it more easy to navigate, and user friendly.
The server status is straight to the point. Do something more with it. Add something to make it not seem so plain, I'm not sure what you could add, tbh, just giving ideas. Once you code it, you'll be like "ugh, looks boring in that area".
For the news/events/updates section, I would make it an expand/contrast type deal, or even go as far as listing only the titles in separate sections for "News", "Events" and "Updates". Once you post more news, it'll take up a lot of unnecessary space.
I also feel like having the 3 characters in the background is a little much? Especially because 2 of them are over-lapping, I don't know. Just my personal opinion.
Understanding the fact that this is just a design, but if you're planning to go further with it, definitely take some of my tips into consideration! :thumbup1:
The "Latest news" is a content box , and it's dyanmic too , you can add as much content you want it will expand vertically. It will be like a blog. The play button indeed it is plain , but i have no idea what to do with it. I guess ill just add the sprite corners to it.
The girl where the 'Play Now' button looks a bit weird, as in I see pixels. And I don't see how she really fits in with everything
Other than that it looks fine e.e?
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1678/zz3g5.jpg
put the ornament over the slider image i belive that is a slider there :blink: and perfection :)
and its missing a pro logo ore text:wink:
Loving those edges and corners :) If only I know how to do them :(
when i made muonline templates i used pieces frome random armors and weaponds and asemble them with some creativity ;)) and voila corners :D
Well i looked at this thread earlier today, the PLAY NOW should look better as Quiditch(sorry if i got your name wrong bro) said. Everything else is nice
Updated. Please take a look and criticize.
The hover state for your navigation doesn't seem right. I think your hover images on your CSS sprites are slightly off (1px to the left). You should also work on that "Play Now" button... too many "white" spaces and the font doesn't seem to work :\ The inputs in your account panel box seems slightly packed up. Perhaps consider adding some padding.Quote:
Originally Posted by kutsumo
"Server Address : Hidden"
This is just wasting space, if the server adress is Hidden whats the point of showing that anyway?
I like the Design, and I only think that you should fill the blank space between the navigator and the slideshow, other than that, the design is nice ;D
And ... fixed the menu , indeed the hover layer was moved 2 px to the left and I didn't see , changed the play button , removed the server status because it was ugly. More criticism please.
I like this. I would criticize, but everyone already do the criticizing.