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im bit new at this so rate/coment/critique
but dont be hars :/: :P
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http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/2892/2213copy.png
im bit new at this so rate/coment/critique
but dont be hars :/: :P
3 things about this design, that give me puke feelings are:
- Too much happening on the background. (Those huge flyff characters need to go..)
- Header/Logo is too simple & doesn't blend in. (Cmon, I am sure you can be more creative than that..)
- Spacing between side columns and main content is way too wide.
Sorry, just giving you something to improve on :)
Overall: I actually like it.. color scheme is quite pleasing on the eye too ;)
that litle is wrong :w00t: im good :love: im gona edit and come back :DQuote:
Originally Posted by Error 404
EDIT :http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2892/2213copy.png
Yeah agree with Error that all his suggested are right in the first one.
In the 2nd one, it's better (tbh) but I think the colour of green is just not match everything. I just really don't like it due to this colour.
Sorry for that ..
The button text is white , the header text is black , couldn't come up with any better menu? It's a fantasy game not a blog.
well im new to all this :) im gona fix and come back with a new version :) thx fore the feedback u all :DQuote:
Originally Posted by mucski
EDIT:
Version 2
http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/2892/2213copy.png
i think im gona make it biger in content and do more there coze it seems some wat plain like mucski sayes "a blog" well waiting fore the comments :D
With your first design I agree with error. But your Second and third version of it are pretty Nice! Good work ^^
k now code it
say wat ?:S i can mearly code a index =)) with 3 butons and a slider =)) but i will try :+Quote:
Originally Posted by mucski
I could code the html + css, but it would be just waste of time, bcuz not playing FLYFF.Quote:
Originally Posted by Keez
I think the last design is the best, finally colors match really good, etc...
Just i don't really like that navigation, could be a little better if fonts would be smaller and on that serverstatus panel, it's really hard to read those texts o_O
well it isnt fore coding if someone wants it its free to give.. :+ but i did it fore execrise :) and the status panel i think im gona embed it under the menu and make the content bigger the menu text will be changed maby some tabs unter the text with some hover effect will see :D
I told you to code it cause usually that changes the design depending on your skills.
Not too bad, I would suggest changing your paragraph font for usability, it would be much more legible and softer for long-term use. The safest bet is usually:Quote:
Originally Posted by Keez
font-family: Helvetica Neue, Arial, Sans-serif;
Upping the line-height would also make it look a bit nicer, and giving the nav buttons a little more height.
Also you should probably add at least a semi transparent background to the server status block, again to aid readability. And possibly try adding some spacing between the right-hand blocks.
But other than that, It's alright considering you said you're new to this. :):
I like this design mate ^^ good work on this, only one bad thing, when you look at this you are forced to look at the BG too much (Which for me makes me atracted to things, but it has the reverse effect on other ppl :() and that might take away the attention of the user to what doesn't matter that much.
8/10, really like it