[Drawing]My Toon Zelda

Hello again, day 2 and today I drew Toon Zelda. I would appreciate if you guys leave comments and ratings thanks so here it is

http://i1242.photobucket.com/albums/...rown/Zelda.jpg

there you go :)

Nice, you should try to color the drawings, it would make it even better o_O

You're a talented drawer man. I hope to see more things like this from you, they are well-drawn drawings.

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Originally Posted by El Jamié

You're a talented drawer man. I hope to see more things like this from you, they are well-drawn drawings.

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No they are not. The whole thing is off , including Zelda's head , you have to practice to draw letters , also the whole thing is not symmetric

From what I can see the part that throws it off is the head.
The eyes are weird and the placement of the eyes, nose and mouth are, well not incorrect but there's definitely something off with it..

Try looking for some guides on how to place each part of the face and start using guide lines, from what I can see you didn't use those.

Yeah I sort of messed up but I still finished it, It was too late to turn back but for future drawings I'll make sure I do it corrected.

Thanks to those who left positive comments and thanks for the other comments , now I know what I need to focus more on.

http://forum.ragezone.com/f145/big-g...-bodys-842836/

this will help you improve!

I really like your drawing style, good luck.

Did you 'colour in' opposed to shading? when you do black and white pieces it's all about the shading you need to shade to define different characteristics you don't need to be the worlds best drawer you can be a horrible drawer but if you have amazing shading skills your piece will look almost alive.

Smudge your drawing and use a thin rubber to define different shaded areas.