[Work in Progress] 麻弓 (Mayumi)
Well as some of you guys know, I have been working at getting better at the Japanese art style ever since I purchased my tablet. Seeing that I hadn't done anything for a month or two, last week while at work I did a short three minute sketch and went with it. This is my first original character design, so critiques are much needed and I will (hopefully) update as she progresses.
At the moment I just have the basic face with some very simple shading, I haven't added any highlights or lowlights, nor any elements in places like the eyes, I honestly just wanted to get a feel for the character before continuing down the body (if you understand what I mean). What the ultimate goal is to have a female desert marauder, but nothing is ever set in stone.
Again, any suggestions are greatly appreciated, I really want her to turn out nice, so time isn't an issue. Even if you just mention what color a clothing item should be, or what weapon she should carry, it would be nice to know your opinion ^-^.
Thanks for looking! (P.S. Sorry for the massive image sizes D:)
3 Min Sketch
May 28, 2012 Progress
Re: [Work in Progress] 麻弓 (Mayumi)
looks nice ;O you have drawing skills. You did in 3 mins what I might do in hours xd
Waiting for update with shadows ;)
PS: Do you draw Chibis? +.+
Re: [Work in Progress] 麻弓 (Mayumi)
Unnecessary long lines in the hair
And the head is a bit too long , vertically.
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Scratch.
looks nice ;O you have drawing skills. You did in 3 mins what I might do in hours xd
Waiting for update with shadows ;)
PS: Do you draw Chibis? +.+
Never tried a Chibi, but if you give me a character to make into a Chibi (or even just a general idea) I can give it a try, they seem pretty simple when it comes down to detail and such o.o.
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mucski
Unnecessary long lines in the hair
And the head is a bit too long , vertically.
I see what you mean about the head being a little tall, Ill go ahead and fix that o.o
Those lines are actually there just for some guides when i start putting in glare/ highlights/ lowlights in the hair =o, i just needed to know which groups of hair I wanted to continue on past the normal hair line
I will work on her a bit tonight and probably update on Thursday (since I am busy tomorrow D:)
Re: [Work in Progress] 麻弓 (Mayumi)
Really lovely mate. Good skills in there. Keep it up!
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Scratch.
Had to be akali xDD
Btw, nurse akali is better, I have that skin :D
Ontoppic:
Prefer the lines on paper but when this gets to final product it'll be awesome.
Got kinda disapointing when I found it was a islamic dude... Tought something like Ezio or anything :D
I still think it's good - I which I had as much skills as you have
Re: [Work in Progress] 麻弓 (Mayumi)
I don't care about the long lines tbh, it looks great regardless. If this is a sketch, then you have a mighty future ahead of you. Keep up the good work, man.
