New portfolio website.

So I made a new portfolio for myself and I'd like to have some feedback from you guys.

Juriën Hamaker

see and comment.

PS:
what's wrong with the automated url maker on the forums?

Them triangles make me kinda dizzy, that's the only thing (I personally) would change, everything else looks pretty good.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by El Jamié

Them triangles make me kinda dizzy, that's the only thing (I personally) would change, everything else looks pretty good.

---

at the main page?
hmpf I should look into that,
but thanks !

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by jur13n

at the main page?
hmpf I should look into that,
but thanks !

---

No problem man, feedback is what you ask for, feedback is what you shall receive.

You really need to do something to the mainpage, when you were showing me this first time, i thought that it's temporary.

It's way off from the rest of design, so you should code/re-design the mainpage again :/

And just noticed that this should be moved to Website Design section, since it's website?

Front page text would look better with the font from the Navigation.

You need to improve before you call yourself a hero.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Z1ls

You really need to do something to the mainpage, when you were showing me this first time, i thought that it's temporary.

It's way off from the rest of design, so you should code/re-design the mainpage again :/

And just noticed that this should be moved to Website Design section, since it's website?

---

I know,
I just couldn't come up with something.

help me lolz?

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by mucski

Front page text would look better with the font from the Navigation.

You need to improve before you call yourself a hero.

---

font css:

Code:

---

@font-face {
        font-family: Neou;
        src: url('../font/neou_thin.ttf');
}

---

body:

Code:

---

        body {
                font-family: Neou, sans-serif;

---

front page css:

Code:

---

#bar2 {
font-size:48px;

---

conclusion;
it is the same, but bigger.
Neou Font | dafont.com

use google chrome element inspector or mozilla firefox's element inspector.
You should have known the same I just told you.

K , then use it all capitalized , and use the thin one. It looks better.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by mucski

K , then use it all capitalized , and use the thin one. It looks better.

---

it is the thin one?

I really liked it, mate but the homepage part is pretty ugly. I am not saying the homepage is ugly, I am saying is the image you add in the homepage part is the one.

I suggest to change it. Idk if what you guys saying about triangles, if it's the part in homepage. That's the one I noticed, that makes the web ugly (especially, it's the homepage).

It's a pretty well put together website. Just like everyone else said, the homepage needs fixing. The transitions between pages, and the navigation underline effect is nice.

Overall a good job.

Fixed the homepage! finally.

Should I delete the render of myself or leave it though?

Homepage looks alot better now and that picture of you is fine o_O

Much better! well done! :D

Eh, I'm still not a big fan of the homepage.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by chrisdothtml

Eh, I'm still not a big fan of the homepage.

---

tell me some improvements.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by jur13n

tell me some improvements.

---

I feel that with the way it looks right now, it looks too much like a splash page. A homepage should be more of an introduction of the website. Whether it be a written introduction, latest news on the site, or even your latest work listed. I just feel it needs more umph.

EDIT:
Also with all the navigation on it, it makes the actual navigation quite redundant.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by chrisdothtml

I feel that with the way it looks right now, it looks too much like a splash page. A homepage should be more of an introduction of the website. Whether it be a written introduction, latest news on the site, or even your latest work listed. I just feel it needs more umph.

EDIT:
Also with all the navigation on it, it makes the actual navigation quite redundant.

---

hmm I'll figure something out ;)
thanks.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Ethicks

It helps when feedback actually has some truth to it, i went to the website my first impression was amazing then people post here saying how horrible the homepage was. It usually helps when the person giving criticism actually has skills themself, saying that there are people like myself who don't have the best skills but i know what's horrible and what's amazing.

Someone said the homepage is an introduction that is a stereotype i have come across thousands of pages that use the homepage as a navigation through the site just like this one, I prefer it that way then you aren't cluttered with information it's there in front of you in an elegant manner.

---

you should really stop posting on the portfolio section..
Like chris told you, you don't understand the way of c&c
criticism is given and I and any other receiver of criticism should change something in a better way that has been given.
stop acting stupid please..

atleast I dealt with the criticism given here and changed my homepage and improved it.
unlike you, you would have it stay the same..