Rasengan

pff I worked my but off to perfectionate this.
But I finished my rasengan effect ball thingy.

all drawed with the hand and with the brush and smudge tool.
lightening was hard though, but I think it came out well..

well here it is:
http://jurienhamaker.com/resources/rasengan.png


C&C

That looks awesome, goodjob doing it O_O

its really good but rasengan is mostly lines...its like an energy ball?

Way too bright, and like flash said, it has allot of line strokes, not just a white center.

Doesn't really look like that much of a rasengan. Not quite " perfectionate "

it is bright:
http://images.wikia.com/naruto/image...l_Rasengan.PNG

alsot I tried to give it a realistic look.
But mehh first try ever using brushes to draw and shit

The brightness isn't over powered in ^that one, in yours, it's way too big and blends into blue, this doesn't, it's a defined circle. A good first try nonetheless.

I love it, you should change nothing the brightness isn't overpowering it grabs my attention which is what good work should do. It's only too bright when you can't see anything else. When you see this piece you think brightness = power so of course you want it bright.

http://i.imgur.com/rQGmz.png
something feel different

everybody can render a rasengan ball...its...a ball...lol

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Originally Posted by Ethicks

I love it, you should change nothing the brightness isn't overpowering it grabs my attention which is what good work should do. It's only too bright when you can't see anything else. When you see this piece you think brightness = power so of course you want it bright.

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I don't think people find it attractive when the brightness overpowers the contrast by allot. And, you find over brightness eye catching ? If something is too bright, does it not hurt your eyes ?

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Originally Posted by chrisdothtml

This is the second instance in which you tell the original poster to disregard any previous criticism in order to listen to yours.

You're not helping, or contributing at all by telling them to keep their content the way it is.

Stick to telling them what you like about it, and leave out the "change nothing", or "ignore him".

kthxbai

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Nothing worse than people giving misleading information. People like you pick at things that don't need to be picked on just for the sakes criticizing. I didn't give criticism what's to listen to? I said it was perfect the way it is you're obviously someone who will never be satisfied.

I kinda always saw the Raengan as this *LINK*, but that is just my opinion.

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Originally Posted by Ethicks

Nothing worse than people giving misleading information. People like you pick at things that don't need to be picked on just for the sakes criticizing. I didn't give criticism what's to listen to? I said it was perfect the way it is you're obviously someone who will never be satisfied.

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As an artist who posts his work on Ragezone for the sheer point to get criticism, I can honestly say that unless your just showing off, there is no other point on posting here. Knowing Jurien for quite some time now, I would be surprised if he DIDN'T want criticism.

People grow from the opinions and ideas of others, you can pick whether to listen to someone or not, but to expect them to not say what they are thinking is foolish, this is a forum is it not?

Hint: C&C = Critique and Comment

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Originally Posted by Wucas

I kinda always saw the Raengan as this *LINK*, but that is just my opinion.

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o0o0 that looks amazing :O

Wait, you have drawn this by hand? If so, how did you apply the smudge/brush tool?

no problem to scan, though i think he meant with brushes or something.