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This is a new design me and a friend were working on,
NOTE: this site is just a test site, and is not an advertisement for the real website.
Link is: Link
index.html
http://i45.tinypic.com/eur9sn.jpg
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Web-hosting.html
http://i46.tinypic.com/339rddt.jpg
More images will come soon.
Please comment & criticize so I can improve it.
Cheers,
Nathan
Good to see that you won't keep it.
With all the respect, and all the love.. I started vomiting inside my head when I saw it ^^
Hope you'll improve.
That is incredibly cheap ..
How will you afford to pay bills ?^^
http://varietygaming.net/nathan/images/icon-home.gif
http://varietygaming.net/nathan/images/img-hosting.gif< where did you copied from?
Everything is leeched from another site, and you modified the colors...that's all.
btw, putting a link inside?
not cool bro....no kewl at all
that link is ours, we also bought the template but changed alot of the coding, colours and text (all text came as lorep idium .....). We also never leeched anything from any site.Quote:
Originally Posted by NubPro
Not bad. It turned out pretty well. This has improved from your original work that you had shown me. Being a developer is all about learning. :thumbup:
Mind if you give me that? That's a good simple, basic design.
Fon't color doesn't match the blue background , the logo doesn't match the whole website , the purpose of the white shadow behind the text is to make it look like its carved , on your site it looks like its "crapped" , most of images aren't transparent .png's thus having grey border around them which I assume it was matching the original background , the dotted borders are grey , because it's a darker or brighter version of the original background , which made it look good. Now that you changed the background color , it doesn't. On the order page you made it even darker blue , but leaving the text still black , uppon which I would switch to white or a variation of bright grey with a tiny dark grey shadow.
yes you did.Quote:
Originally Posted by </Kidrambodubstep\>
codings? I only see crappy changes.
you forgotten to leech the button which is mouseover style.
we never leached anything, like i said we bought the template. and editedQuote:
Originally Posted by NubPro
So, you didn't do it from scratch :(, you ruined my day, I was in love with the simplicity of the design.Quote:
Originally Posted by </Kidrambodubstep\>
Anyway, it's a good webdesign, lacks of content and details, though.
Nope, sorry to ruin your day lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vusion
What do you think needs adding to it to make up for the lack of content and details?
you actually paid for something so shitty? darn..Quote:
Originally Posted by </Kidrambodubstep\>
it was a simple design, I liked it, still do. But I edited it to my liking, which was to go with a pale blue colour, and shade it as good as I could.
What colour font should it be? The logo is temporary and isn't the final product. I've done what you said about the white shadow, changed it to a dark grey (maybe I should do light grey?). About the images, I will go through all of them and change them to the colour of the background.Quote:
Originally Posted by mucski
guess that's what fucked the template then, the blue is too bright, text is not contrast enough and the text-shadow doesn't go along with the bg now
When it comes to web design , you don't do "edited to my liking" , you do it for everyone that visits your web page. Your web page is the first impression in every business , and if its not appealing , or its not well designed , you can kiss goodbye to clients. And I am very serious about this. You like blue , alright , search on google a Blue site , I would recommend twitter , but reccently even they changed their theme , inspire yourself , and do something similar.Quote:
it was a simple design, I liked it, still do. But I edited it to my liking, which was to go with a pale blue colour, and shade it as good as I could.