Poem I wrote^^

I walk along a dusty street
to come along some pair of feet
I looked at them with mystic eyes
to see he undone his fly

I stood there in total shock
when he said he wants to fuck
I looked around, I made a frown
to realised he wants me down

he took me to big house
to which i saw his big mouse
to which he told me I will not fail
because he had a nice big tail

he took me to his sweet room
to which I knew he want it soon
his clothes came off and mine too
until i was down to just use two

I walked across he comfy bed
to which we both layed down our head
my hand went down, his head was there
there is no place I want or care.

he slowly went inbetween my thighs
and into me which made me high
fast and slow, i'll never know
but i'll keep going with the flow

pushed me up and pushed me round
I went up and he went down
and yet again it went on
so much fun on monday morn

As time went fast, so did he
kept on going until he was free
up and down i did go
until he was about to blow

there he finished and out he came
he had 15 minutes of his frame
I asked him if he some fun
but then pulled out his gun

sex is all he wanted from me
he wanted all this just for free
no love, no want, only use
me, his girlfriend is so confused

I thought he love, thought he cared
is this nothing of what we shared
he broke my heart when I saw him there
what have i done, it isn't fair

Look as this, what it become
I thought our love was so much fun
he left me there to suffer bad
because he became so very mad

Now look at him, laying on the floor
because he couldn't take no more
my life is gone, nothing here
my one and only fear

I see it bad, i see it good
but nothing like that pile of blood
I must live on, I must move on
because it isn't anything but gone


by your lovable mod -Evilkitten^^

Evil I say. :eek:

NOpeace - out

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Talent. Seems like a little future for you.

can i post a poem?

The Boxing Day Tsunami

In eternal slumber she sleeps,
she hears not the humming bird, nor the lark
she feels not the wind, running through the park.
She sees not the sun glistening through the tree's,
nor autumn's warm, gentle breeze.

Never again of Christmas will she partake,
a pleasure that she has forsake.
From her though, death cannot steal,
All her lasting, love, and appeal.

In slumber she can rest,
knowing doctor's did their best,
At least now, the shadow's can depart,
an end to pain long felt in her heart.

Though her future may now be spent,
a beacon mark's the way she went,
a mark of hope, and of joy,
the thought of death, as merely a ploy.

nice poem Evilkitten ---

That just makes me sad :(

Very very nice poem kitten, you have skills :D

O_O' Wow, good job with the poem.

good poem kitten but a bit explicit for the forum lol there is kids here "Children.....avert your eyes"

no1 looked at my poem did they?

nice poem evilkitten

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Originally Posted by ExileChild

can i post a poem?
The Boxing Day Tsunami
In eternal slumber she sleeps,
she hears not the humming bird, nor the lark
she feels not the wind, running through the park.
She sees not the sun glistening through the tree's,
nor autumn's warm, gentle breeze.
Never again of Christmas will she partake,
a pleasure that she has forsake.
From her though, death cannot steal,
All her lasting, love, and appeal.
In slumber she can rest,
knowing doctor's did their best,
At least now, the shadow's can depart,
an end to pain long felt in her heart.
Though her future may now be spent,
a beacon mark's the way she went,
a mark of hope, and of joy,
the thought of death, as merely a ploy.

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WOW although u should post in a new thread, shouldnt jack other pplz

in fact i have got to say that poem was amazing m8, im shocked at how good it was, make another post with more

yup, soz bout that. It was kinda rotting away at some files i decided to go through a few days ago.

*bows down in front of Evilkitten and begs for fergivness*

both pretty good i love poetry, so ifu have more guys then post it

btw exile i like urs very much, very moving