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So here's a new design
http://i.imgur.com/LnHbG.png
V2:
Slider with inner shadow
http://i.imgur.com/mlGea.png
Slider with drop shadow
http://i.imgur.com/5HFHF.png
Duration: 30 min -1 hour
Nothing in this design is real , it's just a template
Note: instead of using a slider i tried something diffrent to replace it , i hope you like it
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Please like and rep
Looks pretty nice! What I can suggest is, you should definitely use the grid system. Your columns are not lined up right and I think that's what keeps it from being better. You should try out 960.gs. It's very helpful and will make your design look more organized. Also you should also consider increasing the line height of your texts. They look too cluttered and can hurt your eyes at times. Spacing out those lines will give more of a professional feeling. Hope that helped.
Oops i forgot to increase my line heights , and i've been thinking of using a grid system becaus the guide lines really haven't helped me out much , Thanks for your supportQuote:
Originally Posted by skillet
If you wan't the psd file please pm me
Well, why's there firedesigns when there isn't any fire? O_o
its the name of the network or company O.oQuote:
Originally Posted by Honza Steinke
The name of your "company/network" name totally doesn't find the design. I'm sure you know what I mean by that.
Yeah, the company name doesn't fit the design at all. I would also edit the logo, maybe some flames or even make a new one.
To the Logo: It's pretty simple and doesn't fit the theme. Sorry, I would do something like this, minutes work, just the shape: Attachment 120304 I would add soome gradients, blue and red, orange, white and some sparks, shadows etc. Maybe use another font for the text.
http://www.dafont.com/blackboard.font
the first font what hit me in the eye, maybe could be used :)
The drop-shadow is killing the design in my opinion and the login menu is lacking some, try to lower the drop-shadow opacity a bit. I think you would get a better outcome. Overall I like the design, congrats :thumbup:
The login field in the middle of the two elements at the top doesn't sit well with me IMO, it looks out of place and doesn't seem to fit properly. Plus expanding on what others have said about the lack of "fire" in FireDesigns, perhaps a nice orangey-red/auburn to replace the dull white space around the boxes would be quite nice, apply some sort of gradient effect to it to make it look like the colour originates from their frames?
Thanks for the feedback , I'll be changing somethings in the design
So i fix the things you guys said , i hope you meant this
http://i.imgur.com/mlGea.png
i could deside if i should of used inner shadow or drop shadow so i made 2 images
here's with drop shadow
http://i.imgur.com/cc7YW.png
I am also planning to correct this template by using a grid system
the inner shadow looks better imo
The Hover for on the nav doesn't suit it. Just use a solid color or gradient. And the text on the middle package is unreadable change it to a dark orange/red. I don't really like the template overall but its decent.
It's "Hello, I'm/I am John and this is my website" and not "Hello , I Am John..." And later you write "We Do Websites". Decide from what position you speak from. The "I" or "we".
The logo looks like something from Google Images and resized or messed in paint and the red "Read more" is the wrong red. The "Buy more" is better for it.
Good, good. You're improving.
Edit: And the grey text is unreadable behind that gradient.
Yeah, the grey text is very hard to see against the fire(ish) gradient.
