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Hey what's up everyone. I recently just made my first ever gameplay commentary. And would ike for you to go check it out. I've been wanting to do this for so long now and I finally have the chance. So I hope you go watch it and leave some feedback about the video and telling me how I can improve in any which way.

I do plan on making more videos and possibly adding different games and genre's to my channel, at the moment I'm taking baby steps.

Thanks!

Here's the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FoqTUA9P2Qw

Reminds me of project blackout.

Great vid!

Thanks, I'm really looking forward to doing this for a long time. I was not to fond the the commentary. I think I'm better off talking with just freestyling instead of doing a script which I did. Something I will improve for the next video.

AWwww....I was hoping for a heavy islands accent...Ya Mon!!! LOL

I had to slow down my speech otherwise you would of heard it. And people would be like wtf are you saying.
And Jamaicans say ya mon lol

You should definitely do the recordings on the spot, cause it'll be more interesting then rather than hearing a script. Else then that, looks good and promising! Good luck! :)

Will do, thanks for the feedback.

New video is up! Check it out:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2AVAO444yXY

You sound like every other youtuber, but i like it :)

There are some parts in your video where I'm really impressed about and don't really see at the starting Youtube channels.

That you are greeting everyone and telling them who you are is really good and you are doing that in your Youtube video and most people are nervous and doubt when they are greeting someone that they will fail ( For example me ) and you don't seem to have that which is pretty good.

You are really clear about what you are talking about for example about the hacker thing and i haven't watched your whole video but I'm commenting based on what I've heard and what i think about it and you are pretty good you are clear about what your talking about and I'm able to know and understand about what your talking about and that is really good.

Again i don't have that i mostly talk random bullshit and just say stupid things and knowing that I've messed up my video i just delete it and don't mind uploading it because i know it's going to be a failure and sure people give shit comments based on your voice or how you look when you have a cam but that are the main things I'm really insecure about and that's the reason why i don't really dare to make commentary or Youtube video's: Because I'm scared to screw up and get tons of shit comments.

Anyway if you have a lot of experience with for example Photoshop then you are able to make a nice start screen for your video's and put some nice music on it ( Not that this music isn't nice because it is ) But the intro could be a little bit better so like make your Youtube name flash up or put some nice graphics so it looks better.

I'm not going to further bother you with my talk and just going to wish you good luck and letting you know that I'm going to subscribe for sure!

I love the feedback and thanks for taking the time out to write that. I did read all of it and I do enjoy it. And yes I really do need a proper intro video, the current one is just a placeholder for now until I can find someone who can do the job much better than I can.

Much love!!

Pretty much writing this as I watch the video, without reading the comments so sorry if I say something that has already been said.

You seem like you will have some potential, you have a chilled out voice and not a high pitch winy sound like some other people. It does seem like you are reading from a script as what you are saying doesn't really feel natural, I assume this isn't a live comm, and commentating over videos that you have recorded before can be good depending if you have a interesting topic you are talking about.

just a question, do you plan on staying with PC games or varying between Console and PC games?

Other than that, I wish you good luck and hope you don't quit within a month! :)

I plan on branching out to other PC games, not really fond of console gaming these days. But yeah my video after the first one does not feature the script reading, and just a commentated one. Thank you for your input, means a lot.

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I love the feedback and thanks for taking the time out to write that. I did read all of it and I do enjoy it. And yes I really do need a proper intro video, the current one is just a placeholder for now until I can find someone who can do the job much better than I can.

Much love!!

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I do video intros/vfx so if you need one done, I can do a professional one for you, of coarse its going to cost tho :/

youtube.com/pixalynx

As long as it isn't an outrageous price I'll deal.

I personally think that paying for Intro's is pretty stupid you can learn it on the Internet for free so why pay for it if your able to do it for free so you should at least give this guy some free intro's for his starting channel in my opinion and otherwise I'll then refer you to some tutorial regardless to Youtube intro's.

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As long as it isn't an outrageous price I'll deal.

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did you want a 2d animation or 3d animation? add me on skype and we can talk - huntedbounty