Comments on one of my songs please.

[MentaL]

Hi,

I been playing about with the guitar, recorded a track and well I was hoping for some comments, note, im not the best guitar player but my aim was to go for a more "freaky sound" here is the original;

http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/themental.mp3

Note, I dual layered both guitars and didnt use no effect, direct to soundcard so ingore the bad quality, and here is the edited extended version.

http://www.ragezone.com/guitar/themental-extended.mp3

Song title; The MentaL.


Comments?

 

[Mickey]

Sounds awesome ^.^ It does sound a bit freaky and somewhat of another thing I just can't place my finger on 0.0

~Mickey

 

[Alfons]

Sounds quite good,
The original would be a good song for Bleach

 

[InZan3]

Yeah I agree with Alfons, it fits good to the bleach theme ^^

 

[rozandas]

Sounds nice, but i didnt think freaky =P

Although the end of the extended does sound a tad freaky

 

[NobodyWOW]

Wow nice background sounds, loved it.

 

[Spiffa]

Nice it was really soft but nice i liked it

 

[Daevius]

Shouldn't this be in the music section? Lol, oh well, who can accuse you anyways ^^,

Sounds nice , bit vague maybe, not a nice quick cachy melody

 

[Mustek]

the extended sounds a bit weird, it starts nice but then I was thinking like, wtf?

 

[Deva]

yeah lol same, i liked it

 

[xSinister]

Its my style, I like it, moar plx

 

[SiGGy]

Awesome! Reminds me of Diablo for some reason.

 

[Jamie]

Both Are nice

 

[Sokka]

nice song

 

[Reak0w]

I like it, MentaL.

Share with us some more!! Id be glad to hear it ^^

 

[iNs@nE]

The extended went a lil hay-wire else it's pretty decent..actually nice..!

 

[MentaL]

Soon as i get my pod back of my friend, ill work on better quality songs.

 

[-Legend-]

I was excited over it.

 

[Avenged]

Very nice, reminded me of the start of FF7 for some crazy reason. that must mean it was good.

 

[Iron Maiden]

Nice basic chords. Practice practice practice I always say! :thumbsup: