Falling

[Spycky]

i know its terrible. i just dont know what to do nomore...

V1

V2

CNC
/10 plz

 

[HydroBenZ]

V1 is better.
Just work on the text.

 

[+DI-Dachi]

v1 defo is the better one, but take out the blue like line thing on her face.... text even works imo... so good job and kiu

only thing, add some more colours if possible... seems a little monotone and burn the sides maybe to create a little better dept...

 

[Venereal]

Can you do a version where the opacity is in between the 2? Because v1 looks to bright and v2 is just nasty.

 

[Retro!]

v1 is better,
v2 is a bit to bright,
looks awkward,