~Fencing

[Zen]

v1

v2 (changed the text cause i hated v1's text.)

i know its simple, dont need to tell me
i know theres areas with nothing in them, you dont need to tell me

my first ever use of the pen tool... ever...

 

[i8garfield]

Pen tool is nice. If you wanted it plain then you could have added maybe just a tad of effects. And the text on the second one doesn't make sense.

Good job overall.

 

[scrat55]

text is nice, needs more effect and colors, a light source and more depth, oversized too?

 

[Spycky]

no effects. good pen tooling tough gotta learn how to do that xD

 

[Zen]

thanks. lul it was my first ever attempt at pen tool (and on my laptop's trackpad) so yeah im happy with it.

 

[Vi3tb0i2ty]

the bg is plain

 

[Zen]

I'll add a v3 tonight when im home (posting from my phone)

 

[Zen]

anyone got any ideas on how i can liven up the background a bit?

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

If its a stock try and smudge it or place a nice c4d around the image to take up some space

 

[keane6]

a c4d would easily ruin the pen effect.
Maybe add a light source?

 

[Skycut]

Seen that render before, could use some work/effort though.

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

a c4d would easily ruin the pen effect.
Maybe add a light source?

Not at all
If your good enough
and a light source isnt going to take up a whole background

 

[KyleEnos]

Don't like the 2nd one. I'm picky; I don't like the text "Freedom" when the image whos someone in a pretty restraint, claustrophobic place.

+ I don't really like the render. The texture of the headgear seems to clash with the clothing.

 

[Zen]

a c4d would easily ruin the pen effect.
Maybe add a light source?

yes, im worried it would ruin the pen, il try a c4d though.

Seen that render before, could use some work/effort though.

some work/effort? be specific, if you say i didnt put effort, you do one better. il provide the stock if you like.

Not at all
If your good enough
and a light source isnt going to take up a whole background

il try.

Don't like the 2nd one. I'm picky; I don't like the text "Freedom" when the image whos someone in a pretty restraint, claustrophobic place.

+ I don't really like the render. The texture of the headgear seems to clash with the clothing.

how exactly is he in a clostrphobic place? hes outside.... spinning aroud... being free....

 

[keane6]

i think by the means that he is restricted to that helmet/uniform/etc.
Be careful if you do add in a c4d :O