first ever sig using a model [tedelex06]

[Zen]

hi, im kinda experimenting with different things, so i decided to try a female model... heres my result, personally i think the text ruined it.

 

[scrat55]

text doesnt rly go with the sig, the render is good but needs more blending and the BG is, all i see, just some C4D's with added color. needs a lot of work, read up on some tuts and try to do sigs like its said in the tuts. Try including brushes and filters too. Plus the size is not a sig size, make it smaller, something around 450x150 and u are missing boarders.

here is a link with lots of help.

Clicky!

 

[Skycut]

.. I just don't know where to start. Just try and not to put those effect on overlay on top of the render.

 

[jasonhwang]

Kind of big in height. You can fix the font.

 

[Mreow]

You need to read some tuts before making new ones.

 

[Shagakrath]

I like your signature it its simply and not to charged with stupid things.

 

[Zen]

thats what i aimed for, so it draws to the model, not to all the sparkly bullshit everywhere, thx for the link, il look at it in a sec

 

[Onnagata]

i agree with scrat and sky...
it looks like you just slapped the render there and added some c4d's or brushes with overlay...nothings blended or really done to. work on text too...and the placement.

 

[alexdesire]

Well at-lest theres no floating heads Eh

 

[Leimone]

imo it looks fugly,
the c4ds dosn't fit at all
also the font is like from a bird

 

[DrMido0o89]

i liked it

 

[Zen]

thanks mido.

@ everyone else: advice taken

 

[scrat55]

Well at-lest theres no floating heads Eh

lol true...

 

[Rainwizzard]

Not bad, but the colors need to meld more, the lines shouldn't overlap her face and the render needs more blending. 5/10