First time on creating a website

RakisTa · Aug 1, 2016

Hi guys!
i'm gonna present my first two html pages with css and I'd really love to hear criticisms
or Suggestions to improve my perspective on designing i just started 2 weeks ago

Here i what i got so far:

Thanks guys!

whhacker93 · Aug 1, 2016

For someone that started to weeks ago these are pretty clean and nice.
You have my kudos hope you keep on designing.

Elian · Aug 1, 2016

Like already said above, very well done for someone who started weeks ago.
The designs are simple (something I'm very fond of). What I don't like is the font you used for the lorem ipsum part of the first design. It looks too crispy and pixely.

Decellor · Aug 1, 2016

First one is extremely nice................................. how is this your first??????

RakisTa · Aug 2, 2016

Sinfulx said:
For someone that started to weeks ago these are pretty clean and nice.
You have my kudos hope you keep on designing.

Thanks Sin! Do you know which specific area should I work on?

Elian said:
Like already said above, very well done for someone who started weeks ago.
The designs are simple (something I'm very fond of). What I don't like is the font you used for the lorem ipsum part of the first design. It looks too crispy and pixely.

Thank you for the tip i'll try to work on that area.

Decellor said:
First one is extremely nice................................. how is this your first??????

I was dedicating all my free time in leaning new things and got addicted to it there was i time where I ain't got no sleep for a couple of days
which was really worth it. Thank you

Taiga · Aug 3, 2016

I would give the inner boxes a little more padding on the inside it feels like the text is sticking to the sides. It really looks amazing for one of your first templates.

RakisTa said:
I was dedicating all my free time in leaning new things and got addicted to it there was i time where I ain't got no sleep for a couple of days which was really worth it. Thank you

Missing sleep isn't good if you want to learn things. You'll learn better if you sleep at a fixed interval. I speak for my self, I used to do long hours of coding and I always end-up forgetting things after half of day 2. Sleep is important if you want to produce quality products

RakisTa · Aug 5, 2016

CodeDragon said:
I would give the inner boxes a little more padding on the inside it feels like the text is sticking to the sides. It really looks amazing for one of your first templates.

Missing sleep isn't good if you want to learn things. You'll learn better if you sleep at a fixed interval. I speak for my self, I used to do long hours of coding and I always end-up forgetting things after half of day 2. Sleep is important if you want to produce quality products

Will Do sir code dragon thank you for the tip

Harman · Jul 21, 2017

Being beginner, it is good start. Make sure you add content too.

Hedrick · Jul 28, 2017

i like the first one. very well done.

Lodelight · Sep 23, 2017

The first one is quite impressive for someones very first site.

Keep up the good work

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