actually, i think you got a lot better from your last sig, if i am remembering correctly.
v1 is better but it's too sharp. i think you did alright with the fx and all. good job.
looks good, can be better.
V1 is not to sharp. In-fact sharpen up your focal area and blur your pink/purple C4D in the Bg. Also Darken you Edges, add nice border and work on your colours.