Haseo

[Heaven]

A quick tag, I know the text sucks. The render sort of blends in too much, right?
C.C please, don't say anything about the text, no one is perfect with that ;P

Original Render ;
[IMG]https://forum.ragezone.com/ima...zone.com/images/404_image.png[/IMG][/spoiler]

 

[KikiKANNIBAL]

Lack of depth and dont wave the render ;P
Looks bad here

 

[Heaven]

Lack of depth and dont wave the render ;P
Looks bad here

Okay. I will try to fix that. I will see what it looks like without the wave.

 

[Vi3tb0i2ty]

Need depth it looks no so well

 

[ptkarnould]

Too many effects going on, they are good effects just all together they looked too mashed up.
The text is also in a bad place it breaks the little flow that there is.
Good light source however, and the colours are alright.

 

[Heaven]

I'm going to remove the text, it won't fit good.

 

[HydroBenZ]

tbh Josh, it sucks >_>